Tuesday, 6 November 2012

Fearless Chase

walt: write a story in sequence
                                Fearless Chase

Today is the big jump in space. It is at 5 o’clock in the morning and Chase is going to make the biggest jump from space to earth. He is going to take a capsule to space for the biggest moment of his life. He has Mission control which is also called Temu people. They are telling Chase what to do when he gets to space.

Temus people said “are you ready to jump?”. “Yes” said Chase. Then he jumped. He was very terrified. He had butterflies flying around in his stomach. He was about to scream. But he knew that he wanted to break the sound barrier. He couldn’t see the ground because the cloud was blocking the view. His visor started to become foggy. He couldn’t see with the fog in his way.

The fog went away and he could finally see again. He could see the ground. He quickly pulled his rip cord as strong as he could and it opened perfectly. He landed safely in the Cook Islands. He was the first man to break the sound barrier. He is a daredevil and he has a new name called Fearless Chase.

The theme of the story is never to be afraid just face your fears and try your best.

Chase your idea of using the Cook Islands is fantastic.

Olympic Values

I learned about Olympic Values.   My Olympic Value is Determination. I think Kiwi, Karen Hanlen, the MTB cyclist showed the greatest determination in the 2012 Olympics.The next value I would like to study Excellence.