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Friday 17 May 2013

Habu the Asp


Habu the asp had a very loud hiss. Every time slithers near animals they would always disappear. The animals were always scared of Habu. He was also scared of some animals. He was scared of them because he might be killed by them. He slithered fast through the sand. A wooden object appeared into his sight. He move slowly towards the wooden object and slithered around it. Inside the wooden object was filled with figs. He moved inside it. A sand storm arrived. After the sandstorm past a little girl arrived and picked up the wooden bowl filled with figs. She picked up one fig and washed it one by one. When she picked up Habu she dropped the bowl and scooter straight to her house. He slithered to the river. He saw Yasmine the crocodile. Her mouth was wide open. Habu saw her sharp teeth. He saw a tree trunk and went to it. It wasn’t actually a tree trunk it was Hamse the elephant. He was shaking to get Habu of him. Habu slithered off to his hole and relaxed. Then he went to sleep.  

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Hey! Chase I really enjoyed reading your stories it was amazing

Unknown said...

Hey, Chase. You improved well! I was writing about this story too. I really enjoyed it. What happened after when he slept?

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