Chase
The Beach
Johns cousin Willie comes every weekends. They go to the same beach every time. “I forgot what beach this was” said Willie. “ I think it surfs bay” said John. “Oh” said John. When Willie and John swam to the deep side they could still touch the ground. John and Willie swam and swam until they couldn’t see land. They went far as possible. They tried to swim back but they were nowhere to be seen.
John and Willie were screaming for help, but all they could see was pitch blue. They see anything but only sea water. They were freezing cold. No one could them. There was a loud sound. Broom. “What was that” said Willie. “What was what” said John. “That sounded like a boat nearby” said Willie.
A boat appeared out of nowhere. Both of them screamed hey.As they screamed they could taste the salt water. The man driving the boat turned and drove the boat towards John and Willie. They both clawed their selves to the boat. The man took them back. When they went home they both didn’t tell their parents.
The theme is that swim where you can see land.
2 comments:
Heey! Chase I enjoyed reading your story its magnificent you did really well with your paragraphs. How do you think you did
Hi Case, I really love your story. You really did a great job Chase. Why do you think that John and Wylie swam all the way out? Any way Chase, I just love the part when you said that the theme was to swim where you can see land. Nice writing Chase.
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