Mum stepped

Walt: use better words.

Mum stepped over the other players that she was playing against. She stepped like she was the master at stepping. She was running as fast as a cheetah. She scored a try. “Hi mum” said John. “Did you see my try?” said mum. “Watch me kick the conversion,”  Mum said. Mum kicked the ball and she got the ball over the post.

She formed a plan for her team. The plan was a cut around the person. The plan worked perfectly and they scored another try. She kicked the conversion and it was over the post. “Mum you’re very good at kicking”, said John. “I made up that plan that we did”, said mum. “That plan worked perfectly”, said John.

When  mum was running with the ball she got tackled from a very powerful woman. She got wounded. She couldn’t walk.

After for a few minutes she could walk. She played for the last 4 minutes. After the game she got an award for the player of the day. Mum had bruises on her rib and her arm. She went home with her son.