Hey Chase (Ape) I think that is really good how you used more than one person talking. It makes this so interesting to read. I really like the part how the guy is saying hold on mum. Its because he is very worried about her. What happen if you were in a situation like this?
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Hey Chase (Ape)
I think that is really good how you used more than one person talking. It makes this so interesting to read. I really like the part how the guy is saying hold on mum. Its because he is very worried about her. What happen if you were in a situation like this?
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